not bad...
simple, hard hitting... but unfortunately, in all fairness, this style of trance has gotten a little old... a bigger blend is needed to add to that feeling of being in a trance. Maybe what will help you out is to add in an ambient element, whether it be a light or dark element (The Card of Death is a great dark element ambient that can help you get inspired). judging from what I've heard so far, you've got something going for yourself^_^. 3/5 & 9/10
-SD-